I told myself "I need to write not critique" but I want to critique and this is adorable!!
Many children love unicorns, and its a symbol of innocence and bliss of childhood. This is perfect capture of innocence. A child, and a unicorn. I like how the unicorn isn't a magic color.
The simple color pencil coloring looks beautiful!!
The mane of the horse looks really good, the lining of the color pencil works well, I love the little girl's dress, the lining with color pencil makes it look beautiful!! And the hair? Oh, I love it!! The child anatomy looks good!!!